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you should read this,
This is the plot I came up with. Now someone give me an idea what E.D.D. can stand for. Comments are highly welcome. Plot are prone to change so don't expect the same exact plot as written below. [Edit: I revised the plot a bit, but there is a lot spoilers, and also there is still a lot to be fixed; unfortunately, I can't hide the spoilers. I am open for additional people who want to be part of the story]
Spoilers alert in the newly revised plot (will be updated):
Things to look forward to
1. Further development on Kyoro in the next few chapters
2. New characters in the next few chapters
3. A new addition of animals/pets will appear in the next few chapters
4. There might be another scene with the young boy and young girl
5. Character [relationship] tree will be added eventually, but it might spoil something
6. Once I get through most of the introduction, there should be more action
7. There will be more flashbacks of old characters
8. There will be more detailed background on each character and how each fit in the story [high spoiler alert]
Character
Ayasal: Born into the loyal family as a princess, she has always liked going outside. One of her favorite spots would be the sandy beach, next to a run down and empty harbor. She likes to spread her arms wide and imagine that she is flying. There, she also met a young boy who would eventually become her first ever friend. In the later years, when war raged on, she was kept in the castle like a bird in a cage.
Goal: To find the boy she fell in love with
Rokou: An ordinary boy who befriended a princess. Ever since he had lost his parents in the last war, Rokou has stayed with his grandfather and have been helping around. During the time when his grandfather worked on a way to the other world, Rokou met Ciel and soon after, he would meet the princess. Soon after, Rokou would lose everything that he has ever held dear and start over again in the other world, Earth.
Goal: To reunite him with his other self
Yuura: Rokous supposed sister. There is no exact info on whether Yuura has any parents or not before she met Rokou. They lived happily together until Claire appeared and everything turned upside down.
Goal: N/A [To support/cheer everyone]
Ayami: Rokous friend in school on Earth. There is not other background info on her yet.
Goal: N/A
Claire: Loyal to her highness Ayasal, she protects the princess everyday. Although she is very protective, there are be slight chances when she let her highness be free of her watch. Her loyalty to her highness is boundless; she would do anything for the princess. When the princess found out about Rokou, she traveled distant to find help in order to make her highness wishes come true. In the end, she met up with Ciel.
Goal: To fulfill her highness wishes
Ciel: A studious sage who helped Rokous grandfather in finding a way to the other world. One day, Rokous grandfather told her, If anything happens to me, please take care of Rokou. After the tragedy, Ciel felt very guilty until Claire came to her and awakened her to her senses. After the same goal, Ceil decided to forget her guilt and work together with Claire to save Rokou and to fulfill the princesss wish.
Goal: To keep and fulfill a promise
Kyoro: A brave swordsman who has always been under his master guidance since he lost his father in the last war and his mother who died after his birth. Although too young to be king, Kyoro is still very much the most respected figure in his homeland. During a siege from an enemy, he lost everything he held dear; thus, in his heart, hatred and revenge replaced love and kindness.
Goal: To avenge his kingdom [at first]
Kiyoko: A young mage in training. Although she can be very clumsy at times, she is very diligent in her studies. She has been orphaned because of the last war. When she was born, she had a very special kind of magic; she could alter time, but it was very unstable and dangerous for her to use even it a little bit. Because of that, many dangerous people have come to try to obtain the magic for themselves.
Goal: To not be afraid to use her own special magic
Rythem: As a single child of a noble family, she has always wanted the company of a sibling. When she first met Kiyoko, she automatically took Kiyoko under her care. But what she didnt foresaw was how by protecting Kiyoko, both her and Kiyokos lives would be in danger. Despite all that, she saw Kiyoko as her "precious" sister and thats what has kept her on believing and living with Kiyoko.
Goal: To protect Kiyoko
Plot
Prologue: During his childhood, Rokou went with his grandpa/elder to visit the king and his daughter, Ayasal. This was the first time that each of them had that much fun together, especially Ayasal.
Chapter 1: Now, on Earth, a high school senior, Rokou wakes up for school and meets up with his friend Ayami. They go through the daily life of school and walks home together. Along the way homeward, Ayami asks Rokou to promise her that they'd make their last high school year the most enjoyable. Rokou agrees.
Chapter 2: Yuura reminds Rokou that it is time for the fall festival and that he had promised that he would go with her and Ayami. Wearing beautiful yukatas, Yuura and Ayami have a lot of fun with Rokou at the festival. The festival ends with a spectacular firework show; everyone creating unforgettable memories.
Chapter 3: A while after the fall festival, Rokou organizes and announces a project for the film club. On his way home, Rokou stumbles upon a girl wearing strange clothing. In the end, he found out the girls name, Claire, and that she has been looking for him because of someone called highness.
Chapter 4: Rokou and Yuura both decide that Claire needs help, but they end up with Claire talking about her highness. In his sleep, Rokou dreamt of a boy and a girl wondering about being able to fly in the sky and endless dreams. After he woke up, he found the living room in a mess and someone in the mess.
Chapter 5: Ciel introduces herself and explains to everyone why she is here. Then there is a flashback between Claire and Ciel before Claire had entered through the portal.
Chapter 6: Ciel brings everyone to the other world and clues Yuura and Rokou on some past facts. The young boy and young girl meet again.
Chapter 7: Kyoro defends his home with everyone yet in the end, overwhelmed by the enemy, he had to retreat.
Chapter 8: Three short excerpts of where each characters are thinking at the moment and going to do later. There is some introduction of new characters.
Chapter 9: Short excerpt on that Princess Ayasal finally get released out of the tower, but what could her captivators want now? Next is a background story on how Kiyoko met Rythem.
Chapter 10: Before Ciel and the others set out, Ciel explains to Rokou about special summons, but was very much surprised when Yuura could summon, too. What was really Yuuras past? Kyoro meets a hooded figure who said that he would grant him power for revenge.
Chapter 11: The first appearance of God of Creation/Destruction and how he is disgusted of humans and the war. Instead of returning to his main homeland, which was still intact, Kyoro decides to seek revenge himself and follows the hooded person into the nation of death.
Whats with the boy and girl in Chapter 4?
Id spoil everything if I tell you all now. So I will keep it a secret. But I can tell you this. They are very important to the story whether or not they are old or new characters.
What's had happened?
Back at home, Ayasal had overheard news that Rokou was in an eternal slumber or had a mysterious illness. Because of that, Ayasal really wanted to go see Rokou, but a war was raging on and her father forbids her to go. Unable to decide what to do, Ayasal asks her faithful bodyguard, Claire, to search for someone who would know a cure for Rokou. In Claire's search, she met up with a wise wizard, Ciel, who had once worked together with Rokou's grandpa/elder in finding a way to Earth. But the project abruptly ended because something tragic happened. The reclusive Ciel was hard to persuade because she was at the tragic incident. Although Ciel declined to return with Claire, she suggested that the only other possibility is to look for clues in the other world, Earth, but she highly warns Claire that there is a large risk in this. Loyal to her highness, Claire decided to risk her life for her, but before she left for the other world, she had a secret letter sent to her highness.
What's happening now?
Yuura lives alone with Rokou, her supposed brother. Their lives were relatively peaceful except for the random visits by Ayami. One day, Rokou came across Claire. Coming to Earth, she had lost her powers. With that, a new person was introduced to the family. Upon introductions, Claire discovered her saviors name, Rokou. She tried to discuss with him about going back home, but Rokou has no recollection of the past. To Rokou, home was where he and Yuura live together.
What's going to happen?
Because war was raging on more ferociously this time, Ciel decided to seek out Rokou herself and also to bring Claire some grave news. Claire was more worried about her highness than about saving Rokou for her.
Ciel was able to bring Rokou and Claire back to the world, but she never predicted that someone else would be caught, too. Ciel decided to leave things at the current state. With everyone gathered, Ciel explained to everyone what had happened to the world and "sleeping" Rokou. It was easy to tell Claire everything, but it was very hard for Ciel to explain things to Rokou and Yuura. [Luckily, just the day before, Rokou had a dream about his grandpa/elder [days right before they went to meet the king and princess Ayasal for the first time]. Although with no recollection of his past, Rokou suddenly remembered about his grandpa/elder very clearly.] It was when Rokou asked for the truth, did Ciel talked to him alone about the past, even if Rokou had no memories of it except for his grandpa/elder.
Knowing the truth, at first, Rokou was shocked and sad, but he began to think that if he finds his grandpa/elder, maybe he'd get his answers about everything that has happened. On the other hand, Yuura was utterly clueless. With no where for her to go, Rokou decided to take her along with him on his quest. Claire decided to join them in search for her highness and for fulfilling her highness's request. Thus the trio set out on a journey.
What's next?
Many different nations fought in the world just to be able to conqueror anothers powers and territory. Nations were distinguished by the element and the elemental god each represent. In order to gain such powers, the war had to be fought. In the midst of all the elemental gods, there is a single god to rule them all; it is the God of Creation or otherwise known as the God of Destruction. Because of the war, the God of Creation was very unhappy and decided that riddance of human being would solve everything thus the God of Creation created the "immortals" who terrorized every nation; because of this, the God of Creation became to known as the God of Destruction. Also monsters and fiends increased in numbers as an organization, E.D.D., was created by five different members in the neutral nations, in order to rid of the monsters and fiends.
Rokou and the others, caught in the middle of the chaos, would find many secrets truths one after another. They"d meet many friends and enemies along the way. In the end, to save everything, they"d even stand up against a mighty God.
I also put up a rough draft copy of the new story's ...
Prologue: [link]
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [link]
Chapter 9: [link]
Main Characters: Ayasal, Kyoro, Yuura, Rokou
Secondary Main Characters: all of E.D.D. [five members], Ciel, Claire
Secondary Characters: Ayami
Undecided: Kiyoko, Rythem
Basic Character Profile Outline (will be updated):
Name:
Age:
Weapon of choice (optional):
Dislike:
Like:
Musical Instrument (optional):
Hair color:
Eye color:
Fav. color (optional):
Fav. animal:
Job class (will provide list soon):
Bio (optional):
Job Classes (coming soon):
Character list (will still be updated & the ones currently listed, I still need to ask you some questions):
Name: Rythem
Age: 17 (almost .. in a few months)
Weapon of choice: urmm .. machine-gun :3
Dislike: self-centered people
Like: likes to fangirl on japanese idols /cute stuff
Musical instrument: piano
Hair color: black
Eye color: dark brown
Fav. color:
Fav. animal:
Job class:
Bio:
Name: Ayasal
Age: 16
Dislike:
Like:
Hair color: black
Eye color: brown
Fav. color:
Fav. Animal:Bunny
Job class:
Bio:
Name: Chloe~
Age: 18
Weapon of choice: Katana!
Dislikes: school, getting up early, and when there's nothing on TV.
Likes: Reading, computers, sports and chicken soup!
Hair color: Dirty blonde
Eye color: Hazel
Fav. color: Blue
Fav. animal:
Job class:
Bio:
Name: Kitten
Age: 17
Weapon of choice: Bow and Arrows
Dislikes: getting up for school, close minded people, bugs, the heat, and going shopping with my daddy >.>
Likes: Drawing, writing, listening to j-pop music,
sleeping, playing in snow and boys!
Hair color: White (if I could choose)
Eye color: Red (if I could choose them)
Fave Color: White and Black
Fav. animal:
Job class:
Bio:
Name: Enchant
Age: 16
Weapon of choice: .....does magic count? If it doesn't, then gimme a bow and arrow
Dislikes:
Likes:
Hair color: Brownish black
Eye color: Black
Fav. color: Purple
Fav. animal:
Job class:
Bio:
Name:Kyoro
Age:17
Weapon of choice: Duel Katana's (2 one in each hand) / little bit of ice / snow magic
Dislike: backstabbers
Like: Reading, computers, sports, Movies, Cindy
Hair color: Blue
Eye color: Blue
Fav. color: blue
Fav. animal: Dog
Job class: Assassin
Bio:
Name: Yuura
Age: 16
Weapon of choice: bow and arrow
Dislike: bugs
Like: rabbits
Musical Instrument:
Hair color: black
Eye color: dark brown
Fav. color: blue
Fav. animal: rabbits
Job class: hunter
Bio:
Name: Ciel
Age: 22
Weapon of choice: Magical staff
Dislike: arrogant people
Like: music
Musical Instrument: piano
Hair color: blue
Eye color: blue
Fav. color: blue
Fav. animal: penguins
Job class: Wizard
Bio:
Name: Claire
Age: 17
Weapon of choice: Twin swords
Dislike: jerks
Like: curry bread
Musical Instrument:
Hair color: brown
Eye color: blue
Fav. color:
Fav. animal: wolves
Job class: Dragon knight
Bio:
Coming soon: Rokou, Jason*, the rest of E.D.D., and other characters
*Name change might be needed
Devious Comments
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"Kindness in words creates confidence.
Kindness in thinking creates profundity.
Kindness in giving creates love." - Lao-Tse
My Deviantart: [link]
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"Kindness in words creates confidence.
Kindness in thinking creates profundity.
Kindness in giving creates love." - Lao-Tse
My Deviantart: [link]
--
"Kindness in words creates confidence.
Kindness in thinking creates profundity.
Kindness in giving creates love." - Lao-Tse
My Deviantart: [link]
--
"Kindness in words creates confidence.
Kindness in thinking creates profundity.
Kindness in giving creates love." - Lao-Tse
My Deviantart: [link]
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